I was thinking up a plot while drawing this. Because I'll do that sometimes.
This is what I figure is going on:
Younger brother's older brother is kidnapped and is sold into an underground human trafficking society. The older brother used to be sold for a high price because of how pretty he is. However, every time he gets a new owner, he kills him or her. That causes his price to be lowered dramatically. A couple years later, the younger brother finds his older brother, but can't afford the price. He ends up having to work for the underground society to pay for his brother.
The pod that the older brother is in is used to display him and keep him asleep and nourished. And the straps are there just in case he wakes up, it gives the society a bit of time insurance as they get him back under.
I want to hear your thoughts on what's going on in this scene. So, come up with a plot, even if it's crazy and random. I would love to hear what you come up with! ^__^
Was. Not so much anymore. It just doesn't want to flow like it used to. My transitions suck, weird grammar at times (which is odd since I'm a grammar Nazi), and I have a "passive voice."
I'm more of an illustrator than a writer anyway. XD
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~Junangeki
I'd write it, but I suck at writing nowadays. It saddens me.
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Can: So, I had a dream that we had a pet duck named "Duck."
Dad: *pauses* Well.... Owning a duck isn't what it's all quacked up to be.
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~Junangeki
I'm more of an illustrator than a writer anyway. XD
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Can: So, I had a dream that we had a pet duck named "Duck."
Dad: *pauses* Well.... Owning a duck isn't what it's all quacked up to be.
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your post is so totally artsome! :3
It is very pretty. I wouldn't mind drawing this as a comic, but I'd need a writer first. XD
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Can: So, I had a dream that we had a pet duck named "Duck."
Dad: *pauses* Well.... Owning a duck isn't what it's all quacked up to be.
its very unique
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Can: So, I had a dream that we had a pet duck named "Duck."
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